假设校英语报正向全体师生征集关于“如何创建安全、健康、和谐的校园”的建议，请你就此写篇短文发表自己的看法，内容主要包括：1. 绿色校园，人人有责；2. 建立平等合作的教育氛围3. 多进行紧急疏散演习；4. 禁止携带手机以防浏览不健康网站。

参考词汇：疏散演习：evacuation drills

审： 人称：第一人称

时态：一般现在时

体裁： 建议信

列：

the following are my points of view；

everyone’s responsibility；

build a green school；

create an equal and cooperative educational atmosphere；

organize evacuation drills；

be forbidden to bring cell phones；

in case they surf unhealthy websites

润：

定语从句：As is known to us students, school is our home.

递进词，形式主语的用法，定语从句：Besides, it is essential to create an equal and cooperative educational atmosphere where all the students can voice their opinions.

部分倒装：Only by doing these will we have a more wonderful school.

范文：

As is known to us students, school is our home, so we should try every possible means to make it better and better. The following are my points of view.

First and foremost, it is everyone’s responsibility to build a green school. So we should keep our school clean and beautiful instead of throwing waste here and there. Besides, it is essential to create an equal and cooperative educational atmosphere where all the students can voice their opinions. Thirdly, I strongly recommend that our school organize evacuation drills on a regular basis to ensure quick response to emergencies such as earthquakes and fires. Last but not least, students should be forbidden to bring cell phones to school in case they surf unhealthy websites.

Believe that only by doing these will we have a more wonderful school.

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